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Eternal gasps in relief as she gets out and collapses in a heap. The transition back is hurting more than the first one. Falcon's arms are then around her lifting her up and Eternal relises then she passed out.

"I'm okay" She mumbles trying to get to her feet.

"No you're not" Falcon snaps. "You just blacked out.... your head is healing but you lost a bit of blood"

Eternal moans but lets herself get carried over to where Peg shifts. Falcon puts Eternal on the pegasus first then climbs on himself. Life with Lopez gets on Drake's Dragon form.

"Lets go" Falcon says patting the pegasus's neck. Peg neighs then jumps into the air. The ride is long and Eternal constantly passes out but then the air changes and the pegasus lands.

Eternal opens her eyes to see a cave which Life, Drake and Lopez are already heading for. Then Eternal see's them.

"My children" She gasps. She leaps off the pegasus and runs up to embrace them storngly finding tears slide down her cheek. "Oh my babies"

"Mummy!" Rose crys hugging her tightly. Alaric on the other hand while obviously happy is trying to remain strong.

Falcon then walks up and embraces his family. The war may not be over yet, Eternal thinks, but at least I am no longer a weapon.

 

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CrystalRose Only Me (CrystalRose) and SpookOfNight

Eternal is gone. She's stuck in the tower of the castle of Blaze.
With her stuck there Falcon doesn't know what to do. But the Dragon human Drake knows something that might help but they might have to go somewhere not one human has stepped foot in.

Characters

Drake - Has a dragon form. Pale skin, Spiked jet black hair. Burning black eyes with hidden ancient wisdom behind them. Sharp teeth and claws. 7 foot. Three eyelids, First Magic filter, Second Aura filter and Third normal.

Leader - Falcon
Male, tall and dark russet-brown hair, black eyes, nose been broken several times and is no longer quite straight. Has the immortal gene.

Life - Black hair tied in pigtails that reach just below her shoulders. Light violet eyes that always seems amazed. Body wise she's fourteen even though she seems about six. Controls Space and Time but not as advanced as Eternal. Her sister.

Peg and Lopez - Drake's lost children. A Pegasus and a Wolf. They worked in the camp for the devil. Lopez doesn't approve of Drake's (his father's) relationship with Life.

The Devil - Cold total black eyes. Taking over the magic realm. Super Black hair. Tall and power over all darkness. Only fears Eternal.

Ryan - A vampire but more technically a Life eater. Leader of a pack of shape shifters.

Kaitlin and Ed - Fairies. A teacher and his student very close. Kaitlin is adventurous and Ed is very calm and knowledgeble.

Eternal - Black hair tied up in a pontail that reaches her hips, strands of violet. Total Violet eyes. Not that tall, medium size. Skin that seems to give off a light glow.
She was the child that turned up when the war just started. Has a body the age of 17 years but has lived much longer. She controls Time and Space. Is turning untouchable.

Shadow - Works for the King of Blaze. Black hair and black souless eyes. Tall and muscular. Give off a sort of cold feeling.
Was born into the war killed his father to gain his position at the kings side. It half fire deamon coming from his mothers side.

Rosemery and Alaric - The Twins. Children of Falcon and Eternal. Both have pale violet eyes. Together have a strong of power as Eternal.

Dane
Male, slight, misty-white eyes and white-blond hair to match. Leader's second-in-command.

Chocolate - A little brown bear shaped animal with sharp pointed ears, little pink nose and totally black eyes. Seems to adore Eternal and Life but doesn't like it when Falcon comes close and nips at his ankles.

Alec - A scientist of 24 years old. Dark eyes and hair. Tall. Is in love with Eternal is her ex-fiancee. Has the immortal gene from science.

The Begining
http://www.protagonize.com/story/eternal-2

The Second Travel
http://www.protagonize.com/story/eternal-rising/

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