This story is about a boy name, Ryouichi and he is put to a challenge when his sister Shizuka, gets captured by an evil monster by the name of Loki. Ryouichi has to go through many traps and monsters to find his sister.

     "Hello, my name is Ryouichi, right now i am looking through my telescope to see the very top of the mountain on our island....it is a small mountain or a very big hill." "RYOUICHI!!" "huh? Oh that's my sister Shizuka. COMING!!"  I was on top of the lookout point...it's a tall tower that isn't as big as the mountain but it was about halfway. I had to climb down the ladder, oh by the way I am afraid of heights but I like to come here. To me it is like a quiet place.

     I was about half way down the ladder when I heard Shizuka shout to me again "RYOUICHI!!" "whaa-" Thud...I fell from the ladder. I had passed out when I fell. I woke up about 10-15 minutes later and I was in my house on my bed. I smelled some ramen so I walked out of my room and downstairs to the kitchen. I walked up to my grandma and she started talking to me in Japanese. Her name is Haruka. I said," Hey granny, are we having ramen?" My granny jumped and said," don't sneak up on me like that, geez." I replied," I didn't sneak up on you, I walked quietly in." "don't back talk."

     Granny finished the ramen and Shizuka and I finished it so fast before you could even say 'ramen eater say wha.' Shizuka went outside for a walk to burn off the food. She was about get to the bridge when this bird monster grabbed her. She screamed,"HEEEEEEEEEEEELP MEEEEEEEEEEE!!"  I ran outside as fast as i could but i couldnt run that fast because i just ate another bowl of ramen. I saw the bird monster take her away. I yelled to Shizuka,"STAY CALM, I'LL DO ANYTHING TO SAVE YOU!!" I thought I heard her say "well you'd better help me soon".

     I told granny I was going to the swordsman teacher to learn the way of the sword. I was always interested in swords and stuff like that.

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