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Taking out the Trash

It was silent.  Paulie waited for something; anything, before he made a sound himself.  Then he heard a sputter and a sharp intake of breath in the darkness like Orin was just coming out of the shock of what had happened.  Paulie could hear Orin moving, trying to hoist himself off the cement.  There was another rustle of movement, quick and percise, and then the thud of Orin falling back onto the cement floor.

"Mother Fu--"

"Moira? Where are you? What happened?" He cut her off.  He couldn't stand not knowing; he could barely see a hand in front of his face. "Orin?" He ventured meekly.

"He's dead." Moira's low and cold voice resounded in the emptiness. "Or at least he will be soon."

"Oh."

"Where's the exit in this damn place."  He could hear Moira standing up and taking a few steps into the darkness. "We're leaving."

Paulie stood up too, leaning against the wall.  He gently felt around his mouth with his fingers to determine the extent of the damage.  Yup, one tooth gone, a couple others chipped, he confirmed.  He gingerly touched his nose and winced in pain.

"C'mon Paulie," Moira was making her way around the perimeter of the storage unit, feeling the walls for the door.

Paulie took a few steps forward.  He couldn't be sure where Moira was exactly from the echo in the space.  After another step. his foot came in contact with a large immobile lump; Orin.  Paulie backed away quickly, his shoes now making sticky impact with the cement.

"Jesus," He muttered to himself.  He circled around Orin, keeping as much space between them as possible until he made it to the other wall.

"Help me open this, it's heavy." Moira's voice floated over to him.

He guided himself along the wall until he met Moira.  He found her forearm and followed it down to her wrist until they were both clutching the handle on the door.

"Ready, pull!"

Moonlight flooded the empty storage unit.  In the natural light of the night, Paulie could see how beat up Moira really was; the bruising around her eyes and mouth, running up and down her arms. 

Paulie glanced back into the unit.  Orin was lying in the far corner, a pool of blood encircling his head and shoulders and getting bigger.  Paulie looked at his face; his eyes were open and lifeless but the gash in his throat was very much alive as it continued to pump more and more blood from his body onto the cement.

"Help me close this." Moira motioned to the door.

Paulie continued to stare inside at Orin.  Alive one second, drenched in his own blood the next.  My, how things change, he thought in disbelief.

"Paulie!"

"What?!" He pulled himself out of his own head.

"Help me close this, for Christ's sake!"

"Sorry, sorry."  He made his way over to help.  They pulled it shut, and stood in the moonlight for a few seconds in silence.

"Now what?" He asked.  Moira seemed to be in better control of the situation than himself.

"Good question." She answered, placing her hands on her hips.

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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for redhat "Awesome."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Amo1143 "Hey guys, I've been swamped lately, but I'm so happy to see life breathed back into this. :) I tried to post a new chapter just now, but it's not letting me. Apparently I'm too filthy mouthed to post anything not flagged mature. I've scoured the submission five times to remove offense (it's totally clean now) and even cut and pasted it back and forth from Word, still to no avail. I'll have to see what Nick says...In the mean time - awesome writing you guys!!!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "They could end, at some point. I'll see about dead-ending once I finish group support. :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for redhat "Well I got Moira out alive. Let's see what we can do about Philly."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Jillian "I know! You just made my life by adding another post to this. I hope Amo gets back in on it too.

I know, techincally, these things are never really supposed to end but I feel like this one is so close!
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for greg "interesting!!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Amo1143 "Whoa - Sammy's gone renegade! Awesome."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Jillian "'Effin brilliant. What a lovely little twist. : )"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Amo1143 "Paulie no!!!!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for redhat "poor Paulie"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Jillian "Amo1143 and redhat, we are officially the greatest team in the history of teams. I've decided."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Amo1143 "TOTALLY badass."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for redhat "Good one J. Moira's a badass."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Jillian "Well, I want to write another chapter but nothing I write could come close to how great that chapter was. Awesome job Amo1143...seriously amazing."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Amo1143 "I have no idea! I'm just making it up as we go!!! :) You guys keep me on my toes!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for redhat "I wish somebody would tell me what's going on up in Philly! The suspense is killing me! Is Martin really up there too? Is that really his finger, or just his ring? And what do they want with Char?? and who are THEY?? :-D"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Amo1143 "Redhat and Jillian, I LOVE your additions! It's so fun to see where this story twists!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Amo1143 "Have at it! I'm just its mother - I can't tell it who to play with :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for redhat "Hi guys! I hope you don't mind if I toss in a chapter here and there. Nice writing!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Amo1143 "Yeah! I creeped someone out! :)"

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