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The Exchange

"Wha--" He stopped speaking when he saw Char staring out the windshield ahead of her. He followed her gaze. "Oh...Oh crap...right." He paused to look at the lone figure coming toward the jeep for just a second before turning and scrambling in the back seat to find the duffel bag.

"Hurry up!" Char half whispered, half yelled at him.

"Give me a sec!" His muffled voice floated out to Char as he rifled through days worth of food wrappers and empty chip bags until he finally managed to pull the duffel into the front seat.

By now, the man had just about reached the window on the driver's side.  Char rolled down her window, all the while keeping her fingers firmly wrapped around the glock.

He grumbled a bit, clearing his throat until he finally spoke first.

"Got the money?"

"Yeah," Char replied.

"And the file?" He added.

"It's in the bag."

Char handed the bag out the window while Paulie sat next to her, silent as the grave. For once. Char thought, mercifully.

In less than twelve seconds, the exchange was over; the man in the glasses was retreating while Char pulled the jeep in reverse.

"That's it?" Paulie asked, his rapid breathing returning to normal.

"That's it."

They slowed and stopped at a red light.

"Hmp, this having-someone-killed thing is way easier than I thought."

Char rolled her eyes in the direction of the heavens and wondered why, in God's name, their boss had made her take him along.  He may have been her brother, but God help her if she didn't kill him herself before the job was finished.  All she wanted was her partner back; good ol' Moira; they had been one hell of a team.  Well, she thought darkly, that's all over.

"Where we going now?" He asked childishly.

"Headquarters." She was impatient now; flustered and bitter, not at all what she should have been feeling after such a smooth transaction.

"Cooool."

"Shut up, Paulie."

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redhat "Awesome."
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Amo1143 "Hey guys, I've been swamped lately, but I'm so happy to see life breathed back into this. :) I tried to post a new chapter just now, but it's not letting me. Apparently I'm too filthy mouthed to post anything not flagged mature. I've scoured the submission five times to remove offense (it's totally clean now) and even cut and pasted it back and forth from Word, still to no avail. I'll have to see what Nick says...In the mean time - awesome writing you guys!!!"
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surreal78 "They could end, at some point. I'll see about dead-ending once I finish group support. :)"
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redhat "Well I got Moira out alive. Let's see what we can do about Philly."
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Jillian "I know! You just made my life by adding another post to this. I hope Amo gets back in on it too.

I know, techincally, these things are never really supposed to end but I feel like this one is so close!
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greg "interesting!!"
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Amo1143 "Whoa - Sammy's gone renegade! Awesome."
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Jillian "'Effin brilliant. What a lovely little twist. : )"
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Amo1143 "Paulie no!!!!"
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redhat "poor Paulie"
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Jillian "Amo1143 and redhat, we are officially the greatest team in the history of teams. I've decided."
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Amo1143 "TOTALLY badass."
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redhat "Good one J. Moira's a badass."
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Jillian "Well, I want to write another chapter but nothing I write could come close to how great that chapter was. Awesome job Amo1143...seriously amazing."
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Amo1143 "I have no idea! I'm just making it up as we go!!! :) You guys keep me on my toes!"
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redhat "I wish somebody would tell me what's going on up in Philly! The suspense is killing me! Is Martin really up there too? Is that really his finger, or just his ring? And what do they want with Char?? and who are THEY?? :-D"
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Amo1143 "Redhat and Jillian, I LOVE your additions! It's so fun to see where this story twists!"
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Amo1143 "Have at it! I'm just its mother - I can't tell it who to play with :)"
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redhat "Hi guys! I hope you don't mind if I toss in a chapter here and there. Nice writing!"
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Amo1143 "Yeah! I creeped someone out! :)"

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