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Drop point

Char and Paulie pulled in to the park at 2:30 pm, just as the guy had instructed over the phone.  Char didn't like this drop point. It felt too exposed. Picnickers at the benches on their right, joggers looping around the lake path in front of them — any of them could be him and this whole thing felt like a setup.

Paulie fidgeted with his passenger side seatbelt like a two-year-old.  "Did you see anyone?"

"We just got here." She pulled into a parking stall and turned off the ignition, still refusing to look directly at him. Not after that stunt he'd pulled back in Tacoma.

"I meant behind us." He tugged his baseball cap low and turned to look out the back of the jeep. "It happens in the movies all the time. Someone follows the people to the drop point and ambushes—"

"Paulie, just shut up, okay? You don't know dick about how these things work." Char gripped the steering wheel so hard her knuckles popped.  "No one knows we're here. And if they do it's because of that dumbass move back at the hotel."

It had been three days since that incident. Three days since Moira had been taken. God, she could kill Paulie for all the crap he'd caused since leaving Miami. Hell, she'd still have four brothers left if she capped him.

"Oh, it's my fault now?" He put a hand to his chest. "Like this whole thing didn't start when you screwed that guy over in Philly?"

Char clenched her teeth and stared straight ahead at the water. A man moved into her line of sight. Blue winter coat, jeans, short dark hair. He wore sunglasses even though it was overcast. He set course straight for them.

She sat up and reached for the Glock at the back of her waistband. "Get the duffel bag."

"Don't change the subject. You say you're a 'professional', but—"

"Paulie." Char held up a hand, her eyes still on the stranger. "Get the duffel bag."

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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for redhat "Awesome."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Amo1143 "Hey guys, I've been swamped lately, but I'm so happy to see life breathed back into this. :) I tried to post a new chapter just now, but it's not letting me. Apparently I'm too filthy mouthed to post anything not flagged mature. I've scoured the submission five times to remove offense (it's totally clean now) and even cut and pasted it back and forth from Word, still to no avail. I'll have to see what Nick says...In the mean time - awesome writing you guys!!!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "They could end, at some point. I'll see about dead-ending once I finish group support. :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for redhat "Well I got Moira out alive. Let's see what we can do about Philly."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Jillian "I know! You just made my life by adding another post to this. I hope Amo gets back in on it too.

I know, techincally, these things are never really supposed to end but I feel like this one is so close!
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for greg "interesting!!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Amo1143 "Whoa - Sammy's gone renegade! Awesome."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Jillian "'Effin brilliant. What a lovely little twist. : )"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Amo1143 "Paulie no!!!!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for redhat "poor Paulie"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Jillian "Amo1143 and redhat, we are officially the greatest team in the history of teams. I've decided."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Amo1143 "TOTALLY badass."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for redhat "Good one J. Moira's a badass."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Jillian "Well, I want to write another chapter but nothing I write could come close to how great that chapter was. Awesome job Amo1143...seriously amazing."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Amo1143 "I have no idea! I'm just making it up as we go!!! :) You guys keep me on my toes!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for redhat "I wish somebody would tell me what's going on up in Philly! The suspense is killing me! Is Martin really up there too? Is that really his finger, or just his ring? And what do they want with Char?? and who are THEY?? :-D"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Amo1143 "Redhat and Jillian, I LOVE your additions! It's so fun to see where this story twists!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Amo1143 "Have at it! I'm just its mother - I can't tell it who to play with :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for redhat "Hi guys! I hope you don't mind if I toss in a chapter here and there. Nice writing!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Amo1143 "Yeah! I creeped someone out! :)"

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