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by Rac7hel in Mystery / Thriller, Poetry added June 15, 2008

Lava

The door, and through, in one quick move
and I fell through a bottomless pit
.
.
.
.
.
until I reached the bottom, I mean,
which was a VERY painful hit.
>:(
But the pain turned to cool as I sank in a pool
of deliciously soothing water...
Lower and
Downer and
Deeper I
sank
and the temp
growing gradually hotter.
Hotter!
Hotter and HOTTER It's BURNING MY SKIN!
Consumed by Molten Agony!

Quite sure that if I ever escaped
I would look SERIOUSLY raggedy

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