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Dreaming

   I just wanted to let everyone know that I am just a beginner poet.
  I am not very good at writing, so please, give me a break.
 If you can give me any advice on how to improve my writing,
 please let me know.  Thank you very much
:)

I saw you standing there just the other day.
I wanted you to notice me, but you looked the other way.
You were walking down the staircase,
And I was following close behind.
I wanted to atleast say "Hi", but it somehow escaped my mind.

.
Later, during math class, I tried to do my work,
But the thought of your face made me want to go berserk.
That sexy black mohawk, and your tall, thin build.
I'll bet when it comes to meeting girls, you are very skilled.
I can't forget those piercings upon your handsome face.
I wish that I could see you again, just in a less-crowded place.

The dance is coming up soon, and all I can dream,
Is that you will be there, and finally notice me.
Ask me to dance, tell me I'm pretty,
Tell me you want me to be your one and only.

The dance will come to an end, and we'll say our goodbyes.
You'll gently kiss me, and I'll want to cry.
Because for so long, I have wished for this moment,
And you were always the missing component.

I'm now preparing myself for my heart to break,
Because I know that this fantasy is only fake.
But believe me when I say that someday, somehow,
This imaginary world of mine will be as real as now.

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