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...ething, some sort of mist-like energy... all of the orbs are doing this. Suddenly the six orbs start dancing around you... round and round they go...

More and more orbs of all different colours surround you now, in every direction and above and below and your world is soft light and warm water and you just... love it.

You consider diving downwards in an attempt to escape, just in case your senses are being fooled somehow, but this becomes impossible when you find yourself being lifted into the air. You float higher and higher, naked but still warm, looking downwards on the ever-more distant screen of lights. It doesn't seem like a screen for long when all of the orbs explode into smaller lights, swarming faster and faster in every direction, tossing stardust and drops of water about. You begin to spin slowly, not your choice but not against your will, doing backflips through the air. The lights are visible everywhere now, and they are showing you something...

In every direction you see aquatic life - whales, sponges, fish, algae - swimming, dancing and even smiling somehow. Large drops of warm water is gently tossed at you from everything, and you are immersed in a pleasant rain while you see the unfolding....

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