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...nto the Titanic to get some money from her father and she didn’t take me because he only sent one ticket for her to board.” “Where were you this whole time?” Ms. Ruth asked. “She left me at home.” He said. “She made loaves of bread to keep me full for the days she was gone.” “But she never came home.” David said, putting his head down in sorrowfulness. “I was thinking where my family went and why aren’t they coming home. My mixed emotions turned to hate, disgrace, misfortune, and poignant.” “See? This is why I don’t understand why “God” would take a family from a child who had nothing.” He ranted. “God blessed Noah’s family, why couldn’t he bless mine?” David questioned himself. “Maybe it wasn’t meant to be. My favorite story turned into a disastrous nightmare.” David said. “She wasn’t supposed to die on the second greatest ship in the world.” David said grasping on his mother’s old Bible. “What was God thinking? Letting armatures built the Ark and professionals build the Titanic?”

David was an intelligent young man, but very rebellious throughout his childhood.

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