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...t up with Prod, and they stopped to try and catch their breath. Dil leaned against an oak tree holding his wheezing chest, as Prod collapsed onto the ground face first. Dil gave Prod a disapproving look, turning his nose up like a teacher who had just caught someone cheating.
“That...gasp... was... a... very... nasty...gasp, splutter... thing... you just did, private!” Dil said, pointing an accusing finger at Prod, who had just about managed to stand up again. The look on his face reflected his disappointment and guilt, probably thinking that perhaps it was a cheap trick after all.
Dil’s look of disapproval turned to one of happiness.
“Well done! You never cease to amaze me private,” he said, and gave Prod such a pat on the back that Prod fell into a heap on the floor. But he was a lot happier with himself, and smiled a smile that stayed with him for a good long time.
“That...gasp... was... a... very... nasty...gasp, splutter... thing... you just did, private!” Dil said, pointing an accusing finger at Prod, who had just about managed to stand up again. The look on his face reflected his disappointment and guilt, probably thinking that perhaps it was a cheap trick after all.
Dil’s look of disapproval turned to one of happiness.
“Well done! You never cease to amaze me private,” he said, and gave Prod such a pat on the back that Prod fell into a heap on the floor. But he was a lot happier with himself, and smiled a smile that stayed with him for a good long time.
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