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...never he needed something, he could get everything.

One day. when he passed through a village, he notice that a beutiful girl was crying. He fell in love her at first sight!! It was their cruel destiny!! He thought  " I need to bring her to my house." so he started  planning.. and then he found out her parents needed lots of money to get some land for cultivating.  So, he asked his father to lend the money to the girl's parents. At first, his father,James, didn't want to do that. but Bantula never gave up. He begged and begged James, and finally his father decided to do it because he thought his son wanted to help poor people..

Bantula said " I will deliver a good news to them!! thanks Daddy!!"

but..he is not a kind of coscience person or helping people.

Bantula gave girl's parents contract adding one codition which is that if you won't pay back, you should pay back by your daughter as my slave.

After being a slave

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