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...G's in cash. "WHAT THE $^^% IS THIS ^!@^? 2 Mother^�&ing years inside for a third of what you got here! IN MY �!^ING STORE?!? What the %$� are you thinking? Mac was the first to speak. Slowly tearing his eyes away from the floor, "well...it's not...well..." "For @%&%s sake Mac...!*#@ing speak!" J.B. picks off where Mac tried to go. "Well, listen. When you went in, we tried. We're your boys...right??? But we didn't know what the @&%% we were doing. And one night, a couple of punks robbed the place. We had nothing, And..." "Dee Dee" I said. "She gave us the money we needed to get this place goin' again." Mac was nervously lighting a "j" as he spoke. "But then, she needed us to re-pay the debt." "And you never had the money. And she took over the shop as payment." They both nodded their heads in unison. I turned on my heel, and left without saying a word to them. I few minutes ago, this place was the most beautiful thing I had seen in 2 years. Now, I'de love to see it up in flames.

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