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...  "This isn't my kitchen."  she said, wonderingly. "They changed the kitchen, Reedren, They changed everything!"

Reed knelt down before the little girl and laid a hand on her shoulder.  "Remember, we talked about this.  Some things will be different.  A lot of time has passed.  But your mommy and daddy love you very much and they prayed for you to come back to them.   To them, you were gone a very long time."

Constable Reed stood and leaned against the counter.  He regarded Deborah with a cool, calculating expression.  "Where shall I start?"  he asked.

"Why did you bring her back?" Deborah asked tentatively.

Reed sighed.  "Politics.  Summer has made some bad decisions, and in order not to lose face, some of the changelings needed to be set free.  Or Winter would gain too much power."

Deborah scrunched her face up in confusion.  "What the hell are you talking about?"

Reed tells of the Fae and Faerie Politics...

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jait "A couple possible subtleties... No sweet & low... fae often have an aversion to cold iron or steel, which traditionally has been because it is manufactured. I like the aversion to artificial chemicals... a possible fae weakness in the modern age? Difficult if they're so keen on Coffee.

Doug hasn't shown up yet. Wondering how he fits into it.... I'm thinking perhaps Reedren may've been the hunter that brought Verano back to the faerie-side... though why he feels indebted to Lily is a mystery to me... There's got to be something there worth exploring.
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Tasha_Noble "Haha if he doesn't, I might! Hadn't seen it until smac drew my attention to it."
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Jillian "So, are you thinking about adding, smac? Huh? huh? *wink, nudge* ...adding?"
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Jillian ""Politics. Summer has made some bad decisions, and in order not to lose face, some of the changelings needed to be set free. Or Winter would gain too much power."


So many possibilities from this one sentence alone!! Loooove it!
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Bolsheviki "Oh, you've gotta have the Faeries, Jillian. xDD
...Or else they might be angry. =o
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Jillian "Yay, Faeries!! : D"

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