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Judgement

Judge not the baby
who clutches so tight,
to mothers warm bosom
in darkness of night.

Judge not the girl
who runs through the meadow
and lingers at edge of
the forest's cool shadow.

Judge not the maiden
who longs for her lover,
and dreams of his kisses
in fields of green clover.

Judge not the bride
who stands by her wedded,
in gold beaded gowns
or rags dull and shredded.

Judge not the mother
who cries for her daughter
the innocent lambs
go too quickly to slaughter.

Judge not the widow
who buries her loved ones
and sits by their gravesides
longing to join them.

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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for firethief "So it's come to this
a girl in a garden
a hardening heart
and a Winter's kiss
Salt in her bones
and the faltering
song of a mother's voice
resounding on stone
It's a thin tune
thin as new ice
and twice as cold
She curses the moon

ach gotta go ...
"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for redhat "Thanks guys!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "Very nicely done, redhat."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Jillian "Wow, Redhat, I'm really impressed with this one; excellent job. : )"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for ganga "Nice, Redacted! Same kind of "closure" I was thinking of as well!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Writers_Block "Even if its based on a song from lord of the dance haha?"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "I like it! By singsong I meant exactly whatever you imagine singsong to be. (even if it makes you frilly)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Writers_Block "Haha I hope this is good? I assumed that when you said singsong you actually meant singsong...and if anyone is curious I based it off the tune from Dance Dance, in Lord of the Dance haha. If that makes me sound frilly well, I guess I'm a frilly frilly man."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for ganga "Feeling a bit creative today, and loving this singsong, Rac7hel! So here is another crack at it! Maybe it is degenerating into a limerick after all :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for ganga "My first attempt at a singsong. Whew!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "Wow. That was harder than it looked. :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "Go for it!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "Neat idea! I may have to give it a shot later, but I may degenerate into a limerick.. :p"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "I've been wanting to try this out, so I hope some of you people will join me.

I ask only that you write in "singsong"... It doesn't have to rhyme, although rhyming is good.

And you certainly don't have to stick with the same poem structure that I did. Do crazy things. Be creative.
"

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