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Prayer

Now we lay her down to sleep,
her tiny grave just four feet deep.
Should she wake now as past she did,
she'll scratch upon her coffin lid. 

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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for firethief "So it's come to this
a girl in a garden
a hardening heart
and a Winter's kiss
Salt in her bones
and the faltering
song of a mother's voice
resounding on stone
It's a thin tune
thin as new ice
and twice as cold
She curses the moon

ach gotta go ...
"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for ganga "Nice, Redacted! Same kind of "closure" I was thinking of as well!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Writers_Block "Even if its based on a song from lord of the dance haha?"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "I like it! By singsong I meant exactly whatever you imagine singsong to be. (even if it makes you frilly)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for juniper "(facepalms) you're a funny one, arentcha?"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Writers_Block "Haha I hope this is good? I assumed that when you said singsong you actually meant singsong...and if anyone is curious I based it off the tune from Dance Dance, in Lord of the Dance haha. If that makes me sound frilly well, I guess I'm a frilly frilly man."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "hehe"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Jillian "Bahaha! Redhat, your sick."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for ganga "Feeling a bit creative today, and loving this singsong, Rac7hel! So here is another crack at it! Maybe it is degenerating into a limerick after all :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for ganga "My first attempt at a singsong. Whew!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "Wow. That was harder than it looked. :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "Go for it!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "Neat idea! I may have to give it a shot later, but I may degenerate into a limerick.. :p"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "I've been wanting to try this out, so I hope some of you people will join me.

I ask only that you write in "singsong"... It doesn't have to rhyme, although rhyming is good.

And you certainly don't have to stick with the same poem structure that I did. Do crazy things. Be creative.
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