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The Family

I stayed there for the family, to tell them what had been.

They cried and shook and dared to look,

When I told them what I'd seen.

"The doctors say it was a car, but there was no one there. 

They must have left, drove on by; I guess they didn't care."

                                                                                                                   .

"Perhaps she ran after her ball,"  I tried to ease their pain.

"It's no one's fault,  you should know.  From blame, you will not gain."

There was nothing more that I could say; I felt just one inch tall.

And so I turned, left them there and walked back down the hall.

                                                                                                                    .

They thanked me for my courage, although I have to wonder why;

I did what any neighbour would; it was no time for shy.

I couldn't help but wonder, as I walked beyond the door,

If I had been just minutes sooner, would things be so poor?

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firethief "So it's come to this
a girl in a garden
a hardening heart
and a Winter's kiss
Salt in her bones
and the faltering
song of a mother's voice
resounding on stone
It's a thin tune
thin as new ice
and twice as cold
She curses the moon

ach gotta go ...
"
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ganga "Nice, Redacted! Same kind of "closure" I was thinking of as well!"
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Writers_Block "Even if its based on a song from lord of the dance haha?"
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Rac7hel "I like it! By singsong I meant exactly whatever you imagine singsong to be. (even if it makes you frilly)"
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Writers_Block "Haha I hope this is good? I assumed that when you said singsong you actually meant singsong...and if anyone is curious I based it off the tune from Dance Dance, in Lord of the Dance haha. If that makes me sound frilly well, I guess I'm a frilly frilly man."
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ganga "Feeling a bit creative today, and loving this singsong, Rac7hel! So here is another crack at it! Maybe it is degenerating into a limerick after all :)"
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ganga "My first attempt at a singsong. Whew!"
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surreal78 "Wow. That was harder than it looked. :)"
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Rac7hel "Go for it!"
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surreal78 "Neat idea! I may have to give it a shot later, but I may degenerate into a limerick.. :p"
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Rac7hel "I've been wanting to try this out, so I hope some of you people will join me.

I ask only that you write in "singsong"... It doesn't have to rhyme, although rhyming is good.

And you certainly don't have to stick with the same poem structure that I did. Do crazy things. Be creative.
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