Closure
Feelings, squirming, seething,
I feel sick and yet my heart is bleeding.
The whole world heaves
And I feel the ground beneath me greiving.
My hand, taking on the demanour of a demon,
Shakes and muscles clench,
Screaming out, for retribution?
Or is it simply closure, answers, in this world so filed with confusion?
I see him, I see her,
I can't quite see sense.
My trigger finger wants to make that final motion,
But my hearts not in the business of demolition.
I fall into a final pile at his feet, weep for myself, and the world,
Which has never seemed so incomplete.
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a girl in a garden
a hardening heart
and a Winter's kiss
Salt in her bones
and the faltering
song of a mother's voice
resounding on stone
It's a thin tune
thin as new ice
and twice as cold
She curses the moon
ach gotta go ..."
I ask only that you write in "singsong"... It doesn't have to rhyme, although rhyming is good.
And you certainly don't have to stick with the same poem structure that I did. Do crazy things. Be creative."