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by Writers_Block in Horror, Humour, Poetry added March 11, 2008

Mystery

Who would, oh who would this be?

Involved in the slaying of a girl like thee

Tore her dress, left her cold, tied her to a tree

Oh who would, who would this be?

Who would, oh who would this be?

I can’t even think or begin to see

Why someone would want to rip a girl like she

Oh who would, who would this be?

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Just Chatting
"So it's come to this
a girl in a garden
a hardening heart
and a Winter's kiss
Salt in her bones
and the faltering
song of a mother's voice
resounding on stone
It's a thin tune
thin as new ice
and twice as cold
She curses the moon

ach gotta go ..."

posted Mar 24 by firethief

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Just Chatting
"Nice, Redacted! Same kind of "closure" I was thinking of as well!"

posted Mar 13 by ganga

Just Chatting
"Even if its based on a song from lord of the dance haha?"

posted Mar 11 by Writers_Block

Just Chatting
"I like it! By singsong I meant exactly whatever you imagine singsong to be. (even if it makes you frilly)"

posted Mar 11 by Rac7hel

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Just Chatting
"Haha I hope this is good? I assumed that when you said singsong you actually meant singsong...and if anyone is curious I based it off the tune from Dance Dance, in Lord of the Dance haha. If that makes me sound frilly well, I guess I'm a frilly frilly man."

posted Mar 11 by Writers_Block

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Just Chatting
"Feeling a bit creative today, and loving this singsong, Rac7hel! So here is another crack at it! Maybe it is degenerating into a limerick after all :)"

posted Mar 10 by ganga

Just Chatting
"My first attempt at a singsong. Whew!"

posted Mar 9 by ganga

Just Chatting
"Wow. That was harder than it looked. :)"

posted Mar 9 by surreal78

Just Chatting
"Go for it!"

posted Mar 9 by Rac7hel

Just Chatting
"Neat idea! I may have to give it a shot later, but I may degenerate into a limerick.. :p"

posted Mar 9 by surreal78

Just Chatting
"I've been wanting to try this out, so I hope some of you people will join me.

I ask only that you write in "singsong"... It doesn't have to rhyme, although rhyming is good.

And you certainly don't have to stick with the same poem structure that I did. Do crazy things. Be creative."

posted Mar 9 by Rac7hel

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Just Chatting "So it's come to thisa girl in a gardena hardening heartand a Winter's kissSalt in her bonesand the faltering song of a mother's voiceresounding on stoneIt's a thin tunethin as new iceand twice as coldShe curses the moonach gotta go ..."

Just Chatting "Thanks guys!"

Just Chatting "Very nicely done, redhat."

Just Chatting "Wow, Redhat, I'm really impressed with this one; excellent job. : )"

Just Chatting "Nice, Redacted! Same kind of "closure" I was thinking of as well!"

Just Chatting "Even if its based on a song from lord of the dance haha?"

Just Chatting "I like it! By singsong I meant exactly whatever you imagine singsong to be. (even if it makes you frilly)"

Just Chatting "(facepalms) you're a funny one, arentcha?"

Just Chatting "Haha I hope this is good? I assumed that when you said singsong you actually meant singsong...and if anyone is curious I based it off the tune from Dance Dance, in Lord of the Dance haha. If that makes me sound frilly well, I guess I'm a frilly frilly man."

Just Chatting "hehe"

Just Chatting "Bahaha! Redhat, your sick."

Just Chatting "Feeling a bit creative today, and loving this singsong, Rac7hel! So here is another crack at it! Maybe it is degenerating into a limerick after all :)"

Just Chatting "My first attempt at a singsong. Whew!"

Just Chatting "Wow. That was harder than it looked. :)"

Just Chatting "Go for it!"

Just Chatting "Neat idea! I may have to give it a shot later, but I may degenerate into a limerick.. :p"

Just Chatting "I've been wanting to try this out, so I hope some of you people will join me.I ask only that you write in "singsong"... It doesn't have to rhyme, although rhyming is good. And you certainly don't have to stick with the same poem structure that I did. Do crazy things. Be creative."

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Just Chatting
"So it's come to this
a girl in a garden
a hardening heart
and a Winter's kiss
Salt in her bones
and the faltering
song of a mother's voice
resounding on stone
It's a thin tune
thin as new ice
and twice as cold
She curses the moon

ach gotta go ..."

Just Chatting
"Thanks guys!"

Just Chatting
"Very nicely done, redhat."

Just Chatting
"Wow, Redhat, I'm really impressed with this one; excellent job. : )"

Just Chatting
"Nice, Redacted! Same kind of "closure" I was thinking of as well!"

Just Chatting
"Even if its based on a song from lord of the dance haha?"

Just Chatting
"I like it! By singsong I meant exactly whatever you imagine singsong to be. (even if it makes you frilly)"

Just Chatting
"(facepalms) you're a funny one, arentcha?"

Just Chatting
"Haha I hope this is good? I assumed that when you said singsong you actually meant singsong...and if anyone is curious I based it off the tune from Dance Dance, in Lord of the Dance haha. If that makes me sound frilly well, I guess I'm a frilly frilly man."

Just Chatting
"hehe"

Just Chatting
"Bahaha! Redhat, your sick."

Just Chatting
"Feeling a bit creative today, and loving this singsong, Rac7hel! So here is another crack at it! Maybe it is degenerating into a limerick after all :)"

Just Chatting
"My first attempt at a singsong. Whew!"

Just Chatting
"Wow. That was harder than it looked. :)"

Just Chatting
"Go for it!"

Just Chatting
"Neat idea! I may have to give it a shot later, but I may degenerate into a limerick.. :p"

Just Chatting
"I've been wanting to try this out, so I hope some of you people will join me.

I ask only that you write in "singsong"... It doesn't have to rhyme, although rhyming is good.

And you certainly don't have to stick with the same poem structure that I did. Do crazy things. Be creative."