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...n the contrary, she was a very pretty young girl, now she was a beautiful woman, with long blonde hair, pear shaped face, high cheekbones, full, sensuous lips combined with a slim build and pert breasts. this was not going to be easy. in fact she was making it very hard for me.

' OK, ' I said, ' The girl that dumped me in college now needs my help, and why would that be?'.

' Errrrmm. because you're a private detective and I want you to detect things, privately, for me.'

Damn, this girl was good!

' Ok, ' I said, ' What's happened in your world?'

being flippant and knowing I was being flippant,

'You've lost your hairdressing money? Your chauffer is claiming more hours that you think he's chauffered? You snagged a nail on someboby's couch and you'd like me to identify said couch and rub it out?'

She looked at me with something akin to pity, sighed and said,

' Daddy's dead, Vince, some $&*@^&^ killed him'.

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