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by WillTurner in Action / Adventure added April 6, 2008

The smoke doesnt get much thinner as you go down..

You are then punched by a weird, peach coloured thing with boxing gloves. As it comes closer, it becomes increasing black.

"Holy crap, it's my lungs!" You then brown yourself, as you realise you're also a heavy drinker.

Run before your organs kick the crap out of you

Pray for forgiveness

Ponder existence...before carrying on smoking.

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Just Chatting
"Andywho- I don't know, whereabouts are you from?"

posted 10 days ago by WillTurner

Just Chatting
"Have we met before?"

posted 10 days ago by andywho

Just Chatting
"LOL this rules! Nice One!"

posted Apr 21 by RUFRAID

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"this is mucked lol good fun though"

posted Apr 16 by Matt757

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"It's all good Adam, get involved. :D"

posted Apr 9 by WillTurner

Just Chatting
"I like the random endings that are appearing. I have added one of my own, I hope no one minds!!"

posted Apr 8 by Adam

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"Thanks, Surreal78 Sir! Guess I channeled my inner trout."

posted Apr 7 by Burndtree

Just Chatting
"haha I thought I recognised that."

posted Apr 5 by TheMessiah

Just Chatting
"It's all a bit of fun :D"

posted Apr 5 by WillTurner

Just Chatting
"this is a good game"

posted Apr 4 by youngy

comment on branch THE END. [show comment]

Just Chatting
"Sorry, Dude, I joke, that's all. I just spotted the circularity and thought it was funny, I have no intention of claiming the above as my own.

I should have perhaps listed sources:

Source: "TheMessiah" Choose Your Own Adventure Chapter 2"

posted Apr 3 by theonlygolux

comment on branch You wake up in a field...next to a fudge demon. [show comment]

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