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Susan, Phoebe's older twin by five minutes, after her trout dinner.

'My word' says Phoebe, as a cat flies past the window.

'My word indeed', says her sister, born five minutes earlier than her, rendering her the elder sister.

'How is your trout dahling?'

'Good, but a little bit too existentially motivated for my tastes'

'Yes, I know what you mean. Perhaps breeders should concentrate on quantity not quality a little bit.'

'Indeed'

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WillTurner "Andywho- I don't know, whereabouts are you from?"
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andywho "Have we met before?"
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RUFRAID "LOL this rules! Nice One!"
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Matt757 "this is mucked lol good fun though"
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WillTurner "It's all good Adam, get involved. :D"
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Adam "I like the random endings that are appearing. I have added one of my own, I hope no one minds!!"
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Burndtree "Thanks, Surreal78 Sir! Guess I channeled my inner trout."
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TheMessiah "haha I thought I recognised that."
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WillTurner "It's all a bit of fun :D"
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youngy "this is a good game"
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theonlygolux "Sorry, Dude, I joke, that's all. I just spotted the circularity and thought it was funny, I have no intention of claiming the above as my own.

I should have perhaps listed sources:

Source: "TheMessiah" Choose Your Own Adventure Chapter 2
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