protagonize: interactive fiction & collaborative story writing community
Get more out of Protagonize! Login or sign up as member.
Show Previous branch Teaser
...ur chilling filling bubbling shoes the moon full, shimmering, and then the blimp you're after slipping across its face like this is all Fate.

FREE MOON STARTER HOMES -- Blazing blue and orange along the airship's belly.

Pick-up kiosks dot the curving seaside boulevard. Making its pick-up run one blimp, flashing red-white OOH LA LA all over like some out-of-place bio-luminescent deep-sea jelly, swoops sedately trailing cable and a large hook. It looks like fun -- the hook setting, the blimp ascending, jolting the kiosk up like a good catch and all those inside squealing so!

Stepping inside the FREE MOON STARTER HOMES kiosk just as the airship begins its slow dive toward pick-up, you notice with instant alarm that there are no seats -- no railings to hold on to -- only the wire mesh of the kiosk cage itself that you immediately loop your fingers through.

Braying engines swoop overhead. You have no idea if you squeal or not, because the jolt knocks you out.

You wake aboard the blimp.

Uh oh. No one's written this branch yet. :o

Have questions about writing a new story, branch or chapter? Check out the posting rules to the right for an idea of what you should and shouldn't do.

Feeling brave? Login and post a new story below!

RATINGS BREAKDOWN

POST A COMMENT

Wanna say something? Make yourself heard!
We reserve the right to delete spam, flames, or other nasty stuff.

Please login or register to post a comment.

14 COMMENTS ABOUT THIS STORY RSS

POSTING GUIDELINES

STORY TAGS

STORY POPULARITY

RELATED STORIES RSS

A Country Serial

You wake up with a throbbing headache.

Two men, a door and a gun.

To Betray a Friend

My Favorite Number is One

THE GOODS

Start writing now! Register for a free Protagonize account

STORY CATEGORIES

Support This Site

SPREAD THE WORD!