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...nd building barking orders at the smoking group. They split off into pairs, two standing on the gate while the two other pairs slowly patrolled the outside compound walls. The final pair took a walk into the small village disappearing behind a pair of small buildings.

"Looks like a patrol, but what they are guarding is anyone's guess. Could just be opium dealers, but don't see much of their produce in the yard or in the small barns. Could be bagged in some of the buildings we can't see the front of." said Wood.

Newsome came back from the cave carrying a handful of metal mugs filled with steaming tea. "Here you go lads, get this down your necks."

Khizar waved his away with a look of disgust on his face "I do not like your English tea". Newsome looked at him with raised eyebrows, while passing a hot mug to Fero who still was playing with one of his gadgets intently.

Then from the ground below, maybe only a hundred yards down the steep incline a noise......

Bradley and Newsome decide to go and investigate

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