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Can You Hear Me?

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I'm Quinn Jackson. I'm 16 and healthy. I was on my way to a party when I got hit by a car coming too fast. The driver didn't come back to help me, so I was left there dying.

Dying doesn't hurt, like many people think.

It actually is soothing, like your whole life was a strenuous  day at work and you finally get to rest. Well, when I died, I felt as though as I was being lifted into a better place.

I was happy in that place.

Unfortunately, my family wasn't. I would watch them all day long and see them praying for me. I could hear their thoughts and to be honest, they weren't pretty. Most of them considered dying because of what happened to me. Though I have no idea why.

I could hear them, they couldn't hear me.

The End

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SilverMist I disabled the ratings cause, this one is for fun.

I'm not aiming for fame or recognition here.

It's just a profession of my belief since I'm a Christian.

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