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...em>Losing concentration... focus. Raising his head, a moment of relief washed over him like a cold spray of refreshing water, seeing it was just little over a block more to go. Momentary relief sizzled and evaporated away as his eyes continued scanning upwards, scaling the sides of the monstrous concrete walls that surrounded him. Without intent, they swept around the scene, a gale of gray and brown streaks sending him twisting to and fro in a gut-wrenching madness.

He felt himself stumble as one foot caught on the other. Arms beating madly for balance he went over sprawling to the ground. His jaw came down with an audible crack sending a brilliant red flash across his eyes and seizing the muscles rock hard, his face becoming fixated towards his left shoulder. With a groan that echoed through his head, he pushed himself onto his knees and proceeded to raise himself, staggering and reaching out for balance.

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