The narrator runs towards Nancy, earnestly hoping he reaches her in time...Mature

***NOT A CONTINUATION OF THE STORY, JUST A SUMMARY...EXPLANATION BELOW***

Ok, so I just wrote for like an hour and half and one way or another the entire peice got erased. Saying I'm pissed off is an understatement because I really wanted you guys to see what I'd come up with.

Anyway here's a rough outline of what I thought could happen:

Jimmy and Nancy hide out til morning and get woken by a returning beast...

They see the beast is joined by its partner...

The two creatures start acting weirdly and eventually they vomit up all this red and orange mucusy crap and all their fur falls off, revealing these red sores on their skin which are oozing puss...

The two beasts end up collapsing and dying of severe blood and fluid loss...

Eventually it is realised between Nancy and Will (yeah I even gave our narrator a name) that the creatures must've died by consuming an infected victim...

The infection turns out to be Jimmy who had terminal cancer...

Hope that sounds ok, again I'd like to express my disappointment at the loss of all my stuff but hey, shit happens!

 

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