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This was becoming farcical. He'd only taken the job - a part time no-brainer - to satisfy his parents that he wasn't enirely devoid of ambition; to stop them asking questions he wasn't ready to answer.

And here he was: embroiled in someone else's damn problem; making someone else's damn 'mission' his own.

He should have foreseen it from the interview.

'I'm looking at your CV Mr... er... Bauer... and, despite, ahem, impressive academic credentials.... I'm struggling to see exactly what qualifies you for the tedium of night reception work.... if anything your CV is already a testament to over-educated restlessness...'

Smug, dispassionate, sarcastic... fine. That didn't distinguish this interviewer from any other middle-management malcontent or video-rentals clerk; he'd rented enough videos and worked enough dead-end jobs to know the form on one of those guys. But there was something different about this fat prick. Jack offered his own best sacharine smile. 

'I guess I'm hoping to find a role where I can ground myself'

'Well, you can't sink much lower than our basement mortuary. When can you start?'

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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for JJ1979 "Go on... I feel some fledgling interrogation-under duress may be imminent..."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for DrPinch "24's Jack Bauer the teen years... Audacious!

But not sure I can follow that.
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for ganga "Like the idea, Jillian, about starting with a simple phrase like this one, and seeing where it goes!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Jillian "Go for it, ganga! I'm still trying to think of something to add on too.

Sometimes I'll start a story based on just a word or phrase alone, as with this one (here, the first line was the metaphorical match, as it were). Anyway, I had absolutely no direction or even possibilities in mind for this; just the opening scene, so I'm still trying to work on something : )
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for ganga "Interesting.. I want to post a follow-up to this one, but don't want to ruin a good flow! Will see if I can think of something!

Jait - Us simple folks need a dictionary (at least I needed one!) to figure out what you meant by a "triptych of necrophobic suggestion"! I like that you've mentioned Vancouver locations in your stories (like St Paul's hospital here)!
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for jait "I'm sure we can see to that... Perhaps a literary triptych of necrophobic suggestion."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for redhat "I'll have to mull this one over. I'm sure there's something very bizarre going on here."

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