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Angel's Wings

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Seventeen Years Ago

It was in the middle of the night it happened. It was  silent and serene. The wind was blowing very lightly, just moving the leaves of the trees around the area.

The moon was not out that night. Every single thing was covered in pure darkness, blinding everyone, their eye's could not adjust to it. They had to carry torches to manage to lurk around the streets. But if they got caught, there was no turning back. They would be dead by the time help came on the way.

"Jake, make sure you don't do anything stupid. You got that?" The man's whisper was as loud as the wind, he had to nudge Jake's arm so he could understand what the man was saying to him. Then again, before they could go out into the streets, he had repeated himself ten thousand times. "And make sure you feel where you are going or else you could trip on something and make noise that will wake the neighborhood up."

Jake rolled his eyes - since he could not be seen - and continued his course. "Yeah, yeah, whatever you say master."

The man noticed that type of voice. "Don't mess with me boy or else next time I will clearly make that scrawny face of yours into a mutant. At least that would be of some use to me." 

Jake's cheeky face turned more serious as if death appeared before him to take away his life. Every time the man said something to offend him, it always got on his nerves.

They both continued in silence for the rest of the journey. When they felt an opening a few kilometers away, they noticed that at this point it meant that they had passed the borders of the village.

"Finally, we did it. Let's do what we came here for."

The End
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aphrodite369 Some places or things that are part of the story:

Lit Mountain
A strange mountain that glows in the middle of the night. The villagers believe that it is a place where angels have come there to protect them from the pain and suffering they have to endure.

Stardustium Metal
A defined and shiny metal that never greases and can pierce through and burn the flesh of a God.

Some characters which are mentioned till now:

Master
A shabby sixty-year-old man with short cropped hair and a thick beard. He has a worn-out hard expression, dark brown eyes and a husky appearance. Also known as Elemiah's grandfather.
As for his personality, he is quite aggressive, hostile even when it comes to foreigners. On the other hand when it comes to people he knows he's very kind, but can get disturbed when tempered with (just like when Jake get over precautious).


Jake
A young thirty-year-old with short length jet black hair and dominant sapphire blue eyes. He has a spiky energy when he looks at people as if he is a child, but has a daring look when he is serious about something.
His personality is extremely skeptical when it comes to dangerous missions which his master gets him into doing (he always thinks of the circumstances which make him fear everything in the end) and he's very jubilant when he is around a lot of people, especially when it comes to kids.

Elemiah
A seventeen-year-old girl with glistening blond hair and azure blue eyes. She is very well mannered (except for the one time when she insulted her grandfather) and has a thing for nature.
Her individuality is prominent through her energy for work, she's very joyous, caring for everyone she knows and worried most of the times when it come to her family. She also has a strange aura around her as if she is extraordinary.

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