His wings flap in the sky as he soars through the clouds. His white wings, collecting bits of water vapour, causing them to sparkle and create little rainbows when the sun catches them.

The air rushes past him as he gets closer and closer towards the ground.

He shouldn't be this close to the ground, he knows that but he can't help it.....

He saw her, the beautiful girl with hair brighter than the nights stars and as golden as the sun.

He just has to get closer...

He has to get closer.....

He has to get closer.....

Agonising pain captures him, his back and wings burning with agony. He screams out but no one comes to help. He's too close to the earth, out of bounds, and now he's being punished for it......

He's falling....

Falling....

Falling into darkness, the world below pulling him towards it.....

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This is for a compititon.....If I finish (Aug 22nd) It in time which I dout but I can try :)

It says for me to write a story about an angel so here I gooooooooo ....................:)

okay i have missed the deadline :S but oh well i'll
keep writing :D

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updated May 2 '11 by H.C.Chapman