An Untitled Fantasy Adventure

This is an unfinished novel I'm planning to abandon. It's been a great experience writing it, but I am now sort of stuck as to how to continue. Please comment, rate, and give me your suggestions.

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This is an unfinished novel I'm planning to abandon. It's been a great experience writing it, but I am now sort of stuck as to how to continue. Please comment, rate, and give me your suggestions.

It's my first draft of a fantasy world, in which a spoiled princess runs away from her father because he tries to marry her off; and a young farm boy who gets sucked into the confusion when he rescues her from a pair of assassins.

Obviously, point out major flaws, tell me what I'm doing right and rate. I don't expect anyone will follow this story all the way through, but I just want to see how my first attempt has fared.

I will upload one chapter a day, but they're quite long chapters to read on a site like Protagonize so please, please don't rate me down for long chapters because they're meant to be read as a proper novel. Thanks, and enjoy!

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