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...rayed any promise of that having been the case. It was like staring into the gaunt, expressionless skull of a corpse. Yet somewhere in that face (he could not pinpoint where) was a menace that sent through him a terror he had not felt since childhood. The creature was well over six feet tall and built to match, his frame making Drew's appear almost child like. His long, matted hair swung too and fro obscuring his face from time to time.

Finally, Drew reached the large oak door of Walden Hall, his hair matted and dirty clinging to his face. His frantic knocks echoed infinately, as you'd imagine they would in an empty castle. On his fifth knock the door began to open. Drew took no time to enter, the creatures large boots squelching in the mud only meters behind him. The room he entered was empty but a stirring could be heard upstairs. I light came on to his right and he turned to see a shadow in a doorway leading to what appeared to be the living room.

The shadow was another creature

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