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...she screamed Please help me" the was no reply what ever had brought this thing had surely stopped her mum from hearing her cries. The old man was strong very strong he pulled. Courtney’s feet lifted off the floor as she felt herself being sucked it to the ball of lighting which was no so big she could see anything else. Her hand was starting to slip off the self see tried desperately to keep hold, her fingers found somthing on the self it was hard, plastic a doll. A doll, here she was being sucked in to a strange ball of lightning that just smashed through her window, some scary looking old man talking to her and all she could find as some sort of weapon was a bloody plastic doll. With one last effort she grabbed the dolls leg turned forward and disappeared along with the old man and the blue orb. There was a small fizz and then a pop. The bedroom was empty; no light no sound except for the wind blowing in the hole, and mores to the piont.........................no Courtney.

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