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...es. She thinks I'm nuts. She thinks I might hurt her. She's wondering now if I'm not like Nate. She'll find out.

    They passed the minotaur and he heard her gasp to see it, was pleased to have proved her wrong and then felt bad about this. As if her reaction would not have been anyone's reaction. Anyone who didn't know how the world was changing. Anyone who hadn't already seen for themselves.

    He didn't stop, carried on going, as fast as he dared while still being quiet, but after a while he became aware she was crying. They were far enough away now to stop again so he turned, thinking maybe her tears were just from the shock of seeing what she'd thought couldn't possibly be true. But she stared at him and he knew there was more.

    "That was..." she said. "That was Nate! Danny, oh I wanted you to stop! Only I knew we had to get past it, but it was Nate! Danny, where's my sister!"

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