I sit on the steel bed, waiting for my fate.

I watch the doctors rushing by in a hurry, as I sat alone in a small patient's room.

It was lonely and deserting as I heard echoes bouncing off the walls.

The doctors looked at me with eyes that were piercing through me while they examined me.

I felt scared as they told me I was next in turn for surgery.

I nodded and I was quiet as a mouse, as they ushered me in to the surgery room, and I lay down on a bed as cold as steel.

Lying on the bed, I looked around and I saw through the window, my mom waving at me.

I smiled going to sleep starting my surgery.

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Author guidance for This story

A short paragraph I had to do for my English class, the prompt of my assignment was

'Write a paragraph that explains a time when you were isolated from family, friends, or home and an event or a person brought you encouragement.'

Here is my response.

What do you think??

updated Sep 14 '11 by fyeahSARCASMxX