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'Where did she go?' He yelled, he clutched the sides of his head.

'She went to the human world.' A stony-voiced angel replied, 'you brought this on yourself.'

'How so?!' He shouted, his voice rebounding around the walls of the room they stood within.

'You let her visit that place every day. You knew she would find her past.'

'She said it was important!'

'And it was to her. But to you, to you this has ruined your life.' The angel said, it raised a hand to pick at it's nails.

'How do I get her back?' He sank to his knee's, his hands clasped together, 'I beg of you... tell me how to return her!'

'You can't.' The angel's hand returned to it's side, 'she has committed a taboo, you fool! You do think she could ever make it back to heaven!'

'That naive girl...' He whispered, his head in his hands. His hands eventually balled up into shaking fists.

The angel took note of this and touched his shoulder, 'don't do anything rash.'

He looked up at him, tears brimming over.

'I can really do nothing?'

'Nothing.'

The End
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IchigoRingo-Chan "I'm basing this story on the song "Alluring Secret ~Black Vow~" by the Kagamine twins from Vocaloid ^_^ I love the storyline of the song, so I decided to write it long and more detailed :) So, I guess the storyline isn't exactly my idea, but I hope you like it :D"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YxzmspNVUzY

^this is the song, but I suggest you don't read the lyrics or it'll ruin the ending XD Or, in fact, watch the music video seeing as it gives you a visual :') so just listen to it while reading.
I know it's in japanese... but it was insparation.

It's sort of based in the victorian times(?), maybe in an alternate universe or something... I don't know... But I know it's set in the past :)

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