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...for such a small Cloydian. He was afraid that he would not be able to complete it and therefore shame his family name. But if he did not try he would bring more shame than if he did.

    He screwed up what little courage he had and looked out over the water.

    "I am ready Great Elder, please take me to the place where I can begin my journey," Braven called out.

    The owl looked out over the water with Braven and then after a few moments he dropped a wing down to the ground.

    "Than climb up and accept your destiny, young one," the Great Elder replied.

    Braven took one last moment to stare out over the water and then scrambled up the large wing onto the owl's back. The great beast flapped his enormous wings a few times and then took flight into the air. Faster than Braven had ever traveled, the Great Elder flew out over the water towards the dark horizon.

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