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...rld oblivious to the people all mulling around the terminal. We say our ‘ I love you’s’ ‘be safe’ and ‘be good’. The tears pouring down my mothers face as she prizes Anisha from me, as I choke with my emotions as the tears pour down little Anisha’s face.

‘Be safe’ my father says as they start to walk away, holding my mothers hand as she clutches Anisha to her chest.

‘it’s a long way for me to come and get you from there’ he adds as they all wave.

His words ringing clearly in my mind for a long time after as I stand there rooted to the spot watching were they disappeared out of the door.

I turn, to face the woman at the check-in desk face all made up with a smile made of plastic as I take a deep breath.

Twelve hours to Bangkok, three flights in all, a ferry ride to the islands and the across country by dirt bike.

But will I find my salvation at the end?

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