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Adam and Eve, The Soap Opera: Scene 1

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Scene 1: Adam Wakes Up and Surprise,  Surprise!

"Oh, man," I whisper to that other person who's been living in my mind, though I'm really not sure where I learned the words.  "Now that was something I'm going to like, a long night's sleep.  But for some reason, my ribs are killing me."

I figured it was time I got to work taking care of this place.  I wish they had left me a manual as to what to do.  And I don't mind saying those lions and tigers make me kinda nervous.  Sometimes I don't like the way they stare at me.  But all in all, it's not a bad gig, this garden tending business.

"Man, my ribs!  Well, the squirrels are up and the birds are flying.  But something over there, behind that bush."  I walk over to take a look and "Wow!"  

"Hey, Adam, my name's Eve and I am about to be the best thing that ever happened to you."

That should have tipped me off right from the beginning.

And this is my story and its not a pretty one.

 

 

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TheRiverTalker Try writing alternatively from Adam's point of view and then Eve's point of view rt

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