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Candy rats, chocolate bats, it’s a wonderland of sweets
Ride the candy train to town and hear the candy band
Candy bells, it’s a treat, as they march across the land
Cherry ribbons stream across the sky and to the ground
Turn around, it astounds, it’s a dancing candy tree
In the candy cave imagination runs so free!
So now Charlie please will you go into the cave?

About halfway through the song, the colored unicorns start to float, but Charlie remains on the ground, glaring at the Y. At the end of the spectacle, the unicorns land back on the ground, and the Y explodes.

"Alright, fine!! I’l go into the freakin’ Candy Cave," Charlie exclaims agitatedly. "This better be good!"

The other unicorns watch Charlie go in, and yell, "Goodbye Charlie!!" They don't follow him in.

"Goodbye…? What?!?!?!" he yells.

 The door to the cave starts to close.

Wait until the other unicorns are gone, and then eat your way through the side of the mountain.

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