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...I love caramel- hopping from my backporch to a special place of woods where he would have a massage expert waiting for me with custom tables set on the grass, and a steaming portable hot bath. I imagined a toy dog yipping at the door, with his tag saying, "FOLLOW ME" and the toy dog running a certain path, around certain blocks, and to a surprise block party, just for me. I loved Peter's surprises.

"My mother wants you to come over and spend spend a few weeks with them, " He said, a lisp clear in his voice.

Peter's mother. She was wiry, white haired, triangled-glassed, with a pointy green eyed gaze and a double chin though somehow how she would have a double chin with that trim figure was beats by me. She had tendencies to criticize,  to remark without concern for others, and she remarked plenty of times in my presence that Peter deserved better.

I could not say anything to his news, so bluntly delivered.But I had to say something....

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