Valentines Day

this is a poem my little cousin wrote
i said id put it on and get some feedback, cause i dont write poetry, i liked it but i wanted feedback from some peots if possible or just some thoughts from people
but dont be too harsh ;)


I woke up one morning

And heard a knock at the door,

There was nobody there

But there was something on the floor


Flowers and chocolate

And a card too,

It was all wonderful

But it was from who?


The flowers were roses

Red and delicate they were, and when I opened the card envelope

I made sure not to tear.


That Valentines Day

I will never forget,

But my mystery man

 I wish I had met.                                                                                                   

The End

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