Everlasting Dreams of You

You're only just a dream away from me

Near the corner of my eyes waiting for my sleep

And then you make your entrance, sparking up my dreams

As real as you can be to me

We were never meant to be

You were a fairy tale that wasn't real

A little girl's Prince Charming just disappeared

Leaving me broken and empty

Now I don't know where to go

Lost within a world that is my own

You belong to me yet I can't have you

Questioning why...

Everlasting dreams

Come to me

Because if I can only be with you in one

Then I'd sleep forever

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Author guidance for This poem

Dedicated to SumnerzAngel

Feedback and criticsim welcome here!

I'm having a go at some serious poetry, though I wouldn't consider writing a poem in two minutes 'serious'. Most of these are driven off my emotions and that's mainly why I made this work unratable at the start because I would feel that my emotions are being judged over my writing, but made it ratable recently (thanks to the suggestion of SumnerzAngel).

I'm new to poetry so I'm looking for some real hardcore critique. So hit me with 'em! I dare ya!

updated Feb 25 by Trish