Peach
This is a haiku about more than mere tinned fruit. In fact, I don't even like peaches. Anyway, that's the 140 character limit met now...
Encased in metal
To protect this bruising fruit
Love: my peach's shield
The End
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Archi Teuthis has inspired me to try my hand again at poetry after many years having left it alone.I tend to rarely follow any poetry conventions consciously and tend to write with a heavy use of metaphor that probably only I get. I also like to hide snippets of extra information relevant to the subject matter in my poems.
To be honest, I don't think anything I write makes much sense or is any good even though I once had a poem of mine published (which ironically I hated, thinking it one of my worst ever poems).
Feel free to provide criticism and advise or to ask what the hell I'm writing about.
P.S. Oh, the title This Silent Tirade is also that of the first poem in case it's not obvious.
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