The Heart's Pen. (Poetry) - My Flaw
I was doing my usual advice giving to a worried friend at around the point of men. It ended in us both blurting out alot of spirtual stuff.
Upon waking and rereading through it I got quite good points I thought would be good to write.
I bulit a wall.
Not to keep anyone out.
More to see who wondered,
What was on the other side.
.
Some people made it,
Into my soul.
More because I brought them in.
I wanted them to see Me.
.
You walked past.
And quite acidentally,
Lightly scratched my surface.
You looked and realised.
.
There was someone,
Someone underneath
Hidden from hurt and opinion.
You looked behind my defences
.
You cared to know
Just what I was
Underneath it all
You found me
.
In the mess,
Of dark and covers.
You broke in ... uninvited
You Loved me.
.
Nobody before,
Ever tried to see me,
You and your perfect mind,
Found my flaw.
.
My weakness.
Blue eyes made me,
See in a different light
I love you.

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