The Heart's Pen. (Poetry) - My Flaw

I was doing my usual advice giving to a worried friend at around the point of men. It ended in us both blurting out alot of spirtual stuff.
Upon waking and rereading through it I got quite good points I thought would be good to write.

I bulit a wall.

Not to keep anyone out.

More to see who wondered,

What was on the other side.

.

Some people made it,

Into my soul.

More because I brought them in.

I wanted them to see Me.

.

You walked past.

And quite acidentally,

Lightly scratched my surface.

You looked and realised.

.

There was someone,

Someone underneath

Hidden from hurt and opinion.

You looked behind my defences

.

You cared to know

Just what I was

Underneath it all

You found me
.

In the mess,

Of dark and covers.

You broke in ... uninvited

You Loved me.

.

Nobody before,

Ever tried to see me,

You and your perfect mind,

Found my flaw.

.

My weakness.

Blue eyes made me,

See in a different light

I love you.

The End

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