The Heart's Pen. (Poetry) - My Flaw

I was doing my usual advice giving to a worried friend at around the point of men. It ended in us both blurting out alot of spirtual stuff.
Upon waking and rereading through it I got quite good points I thought would be good to write.

I bulit a wall.

Not to keep anyone out.

More to see who wondered,

What was on the other side.


Some people made it,

Into my soul.

More because I brought them in.

I wanted them to see Me.


You walked past.

And quite acidentally,

Lightly scratched my surface.

You looked and realised.


There was someone,

Someone underneath

Hidden from hurt and opinion.

You looked behind my defences


You cared to know

Just what I was

Underneath it all

You found me

In the mess,

Of dark and covers.

You broke in ... uninvited

You Loved me.


Nobody before,

Ever tried to see me,

You and your perfect mind,

Found my flaw.


My weakness.

Blue eyes made me,

See in a different light

I love you.

The End

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