The Heart's Pen- Poetry
My Flaw-
I built a wall.
Not to keep anyone out.
More to see who wondered,
What was on the other side.
.
Some people made it,
Into my soul.
More because I brought them in.
I wanted them to see Me.
.
You walked past.
And quite accidentally,
Lightly scratched my surface.
You looked and realised.
.
There was someone,
Someone underneath
Hidden from hurt and opinion.
You looked behind my defences
.
You cared to know
Just what I was
Underneath it all
You found me
.
In the mess,
Of dark and covers.
You broke in ... uninvited
You Loved me.
.
Nobody before,
Ever tried to see me,
You and your perfect mind,
Found my flaw.
.
My weakness.
Blue eyes made me,
See in a different light
I love you.
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This is The Heart's Pen Poems. Please post in any of your own poems to do with Love, if it be a relationship love, a family love, a freindship love, missing someone , betrayed by love, regretting, wanting someone ect ANYTHING to do with love plonk it in. Sometimes you need to write it to let it out. 4 PARTICIPANTS IN THIS POEM
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