Shadows of The Undecided Mind - Slow

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Come with me to unveil thy beauty

Break the chains with the magician fire that never faded

Your deep regret, entwined around my neck like a hangmans noose

I wonder

Is this a dream or am I with you

 

Sl-oooow

Down

Sl-ooowww

Only the loved

Are not lovely

 

Southern sun

Wears you down

Makes you think

You’re alone now

Riding on Charon you hear my voice through the dreamland caverns

 

Sl-owwww

Sl-owww

Soon I will come find you

 

Only the loved

Are not lovely

 

Ice cream sticks to your face

Life loved, now erased

Sl-owww

Sl-oww down

Only the loved are not lovely

 

Lost girl taken to new land

I must find her, to accomplish my plans

Still Faith calls me

Sl-owww

Sl-owww

 

And I fear, that heartbeat, beats

Sl-owww

Sl-oww

 

Slow slow slow

She will drown in my heart

Rushing to find the girl

She will go down she will drown

 

Sl-owww

Sl-owww

 

Death awaits, those who move

Sl-oww

Sl-oww

 

And in the end, it was a nightmare

I survived, by running fast and waking

Sl-oww

Sl-oww

Sl-oww

 

The End

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