Sea of Hate

My first poem that doesn't rhyme! Please tell me if it's any good or not.

I dove

Over the cliffs of love

And into the sea of hate

Hitting it with a refreshing splash

Letting it engulf me

I swam deeper into the poison

Opening my mouth to drink it in

Savoring the taste as it hit my tounge

And filled my lungs

My heart became black

And incapable of love

You tried to change that

But you'll never be able to because

I was in the water

Just long enough to drown

The End

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