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Revision Loop

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This revision is foundation
For much recycled frustration
And after some culmination
Is a source of perturbation
It equals much isolation
Right after its embarkation - 
Prefer colonic irrigation
To this rank abomination!

(repeat many times in rhythmic chant)

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