Poetry Workshop Summer 2012
Critique a poem and share a poem.
Gravity Reworked
I thought for a moment that by
enhancing gravity I could bring
a softness to the harsh
edge of the universe.
But you reminded me, of course,
that there is no edge
and that increasing gravity
would only weigh us down more
with the many cares
that come with being human.
Despite this I was glad
to be with you.
Glad to be human with you.

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