Pain 1
Love is Hell
Love is all around me, except in you
All you have to say is love is hell
I see now
and you can quote me on it
Love is hell
Doesn't mean a thing until it happens to you
Young love, old love, friend love
The most hellish one of all is true love
They'll cox you out
Ply you with kisses
Just so they can steal your heart
and never give it back
Just a soul with a hole and not much else.
Love is hell
Avoid it everytime
To bad I could never take my own advice.
The End
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You've heard of rap battles... now how about poetry battlez?
Take the same topic, and write something original on it, to see who takes the crown... If we got enough people, we could have like a knockout tournament decided by the highest voted of the two poems per topic.
For each reply, leave a branch for someone to challenge you at the same topic, as well as inventing 1 or 2 new topics.
Could be a good way to compare styles and ideas 9 PARTICIPANTS IN THIS POEM
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was posted on Dec 13, 2008 by
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